Comments on: “Gettin’ Out”: Polish Pass

By: Dave

Dave — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 21:44:13 +0000

Thanks everyone! I appreciate the kind words and helpful feedback. I’ll post another update after I finish addressing this stuff.

By: Marco....

Marco.... — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 18:13:12 +0000

Yo Dave..your work is looking great…the hardwork paid off, it evan is making me thinking about putting things like overlap and attention to arcs in my work….lets see more…..

By: Net Perin

Net Perin — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 23:08:36 +0000

Hey Dave,
GReat animation here
the only thing that sticks out for me is around frames 52-54… check your spacing… his knees pop open rather quickly…
Nice Work!!!
Cheers!
~Net

By: Caryn Girardi

Caryn Girardi — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 21:56:59 +0000

Great acting! I love it!

The only thing that bugs me is from 245-275 he looks like he could use more weight in his steps. I suggest bringing his hips down a bit more with each step.

Hope that helps.

By: Sebastian Kalemba

Sebastian Kalemba — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 09:14:27 +0000

Amazing staff!! I love the last walk, such a good appeal.

By: Jeff Kim

Jeff Kim — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 04:14:52 +0000

GREAT GREAT work!!!

2 parts seems a bit swimmy to me:
1.) 100-120. His head and torso seem to drift a bit. How about varying the rate of when they drift to screen right. Really slow out of it, quicken it just a bit, and then really slow into 120.
2.) 120-138: the head only seems to be a tad drifty. However, the scr right arm seems to be more notoceably swimmy. Maybe try lessening the slow in near 140 (make it faster and stop a but more tightly).

On 52-57, it feels a bit poppy on the head especially. The head seems to come down at the same time as the torso. This is a good time to play with overlap on the head. It’s a great idea though.

Love that stomp out!